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5/5/2019

“Do It the Hard Way”

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Nelson Algren c1951. Courtesy Library of Congress.

​Tim Cooper of Oakdale, Minn., has served as my coach and chief cheerleader as I completed my first novel, Next Train Out. If you would like to submit a blog post for Clearing the Fog, contact us here.

I have been fortunate to have observed the writing process Sallie has been engaged in over the last year. To say that it has been an arduous task would be an understatement. But the finished product is a work of art, a work of social relevance, and a work of empathetic exploration that seeks to meld the personal with the historical amid an examination of love and justice.

This past week I have been reading the great Chicago writer Nelson Algren’s essay “Do It the Hard Way.” In this piece, Algren explicates what is “true” in all great writing. He urges authors to be true to themselves and never sell out for the sake of commercial expedience. 

But Algren’s essay is so much more than that. Indeed, it can be read as an exhortation to the writer, the reader—to all of us—to seek out and validate the lives of the marginalized and disenfranchised. To listen carefully, uncritically, to their voices, their cadences, and their language and to then relish its uniqueness. 

Sallie has two main characters in her novel: her grandfather, Lyons Board, and his fourth wife, Effie Mae. I have told Sallie that I think there is a third major character: language. For, as you will see, Next Train Out is a novel of the vernacular, a novel of linguistic nuance that respects the musings of an Appalachian mother from the coal camps of eastern Kentucky and the sardonic quips of a privileged central Kentucky rake equally. 

And beautifully. In his essay, Algren asserts that “if you listen long enough, the commonest speech will begin to ring like poetry. [And] poetry it is, the best and the truest: the poetry of the ball-park and the dance hall, of the drugstore at noon, of the pool room and the corner newsstand, of the Montgomery-Ward salesgirls reminiscing on the streetcar or bus.”

I don’t believe Sallie is as familiar with Nelson Algren’s work as I am, although we have discussed his writing and his life—and Colin Asher’s new biography of Algren—over the past months. I do know, however, that she has somehow internalized Algren’s dictum. Consider these two examples:

Nelson: “I hate t’ see the Spring ‘n Summer come so bad,” she was telling him, “I just don’t seem so good as other people any more. Sometimes I’m that disgusted of myself I think: ‘Just one more dope, that’s you.’ I won’t set up there in that room another Spring alone, thinkin’ stuff like that…I hate t’ see the Spring ‘n Summer come. So bad.” (from "Do It the Hard Way," collected in Entrapment and Other Writings)  

Sallie: “Me and Lyons, we’ve been together a long time. At least for me it feels like a long time. Seven years. That’s forever after your last husband was kilt within a year of your marryin’ him, and your first husband proved to be a scoundrel after you birthed him four children. Well, maybe that marriage lasted longer than I remember. I just know I was ready to be rid of ‘im. The traitor.”  (Effie Mae in Next Train Out)

Poetry, indeed. Poetry. When you read Sallie’s novel, plunge into the rhythm, the poetry of her writing. Yes, enjoy it on a macro-level—the story is marvelous, the narrative trajectory compulsively readable. But please, please, engage it on the micro-level, too, the level of the sentence, the word. I think we learn more about characters by the way they speak than we do any other way. Each of Sallie’s characters has a distinct voice that propels us to a greater understanding of who he or she is. This is a novel of social relevance that embraces Algren’s call for justice.

It remains only for me to confess something to you: I am a little bit in love with Effie Mae. I think about her often, and I think that I would have been a suitor, too, if the opportunity had presented itself. I know that you, too, will love her, and Lyons, and all of Sallie’s peripheral characters. 

Read this novel. Love the characters and their voices. But Effie Mae’s mine.
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Fonda McWilliams
5/5/2019 09:38:02 pm

Can't wait to take it in at every level! Bravo, Sallie!

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Timothy Cooper
5/8/2019 06:29:51 am

Fonda:
Sallie's novel is amazing. You'll be delighted with it on every level. I look forward to learning of your response and, perhaps, discussing it with you. Enjoy.
Tim

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Barbara Fallis
5/7/2019 08:46:41 pm

A well deserved tribute to you, Sallie. Sign me up for the first book tour.
Barbara

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Timothy Cooper
5/8/2019 06:32:29 am

Barbara:
Thanks for your brief note. It's been so much fun to see the progression of Sallie's magnificent novel. I know you'll enjoy it.
Tim

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Roi-Ann Bettez link
6/1/2019 11:41:53 pm

Thanks for this post. I, too, have read Sallie's manuscript and was drawn in by the voices that reveal Lyons' and Effie Mae's histories and their hearts. She chose a dramatic, interesting way to take us on their separate and mutual journeys. I also loved the satisfying ending. I highly recommend her book to anybody who likes literary fiction. I agree with everything you said, Tim, except one: you're going to have to share Effie Mae. Wonderful job, Sallie.

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Timothy Cooper
6/3/2019 08:02:03 am

Roi-Ann:
Thanks for your comment. I've enjoyed hearing about your feedback to Sallie's novel, and I know that all of your comments have been beneficial to her as she crafted her novel. Sorry: Effie Mae is all mine!
Thanks again, Roi-Ann.
Tim

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    Between the debilitating effects of age and the 24-hour crush of mind-bending news, my brain is frequently in a fog. Nonetheless. I'll occasionally try to sweep aside the ashy gray matter and shed some light on what's going on at Murky Press. Perhaps together we can also gain a little insight into how we can better use words to organize and clarify the world around us.

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